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Scarpelt95
Scarpelt95
60. RE: Mentoring for Ripplepaw
Oct 24 2009, 7:42 PM EDT | Post edited: Oct 24 2009, 7:42 PM EDT
Scartail looked at his apprentice, he whacked the black cat so hard he crumpled to the ground, unconscious, and bowled into the brown cat, pummeling his belly till he screamed. Do you find this valuable?    
alyamh
alyamh
61. RE: Mentoring for Ripplepaw
Oct 24 2009, 7:46 PM EDT | Post edited: Oct 24 2009, 7:46 PM EDT
Ripplepaw suddenly felt the urge to play, she landed sheathed blows on the brown toms muzzle, they were hard and well aimed. Do you find this valuable?    
Scarpelt95
Scarpelt95
62. RE: Mentoring for Ripplepaw
Oct 24 2009, 8:47 PM EDT | Post edited: Oct 24 2009, 8:47 PM EDT
"Do that under the neck," he instructed, "that will hurt his throat. Do you find this valuable?    
sherryanime3
sherryanime3
63. RE: Mentoring for Ripplepaw
Oct 24 2009, 9:19 PM EDT | Post edited: Oct 24 2009, 9:19 PM EDT
Dirtheart hissed and scrached the black cat.He ran over to Ripplepaw and swat his tail in his face. Do you find this valuable?    
Scarpelt95
Scarpelt95
64. RE: Mentoring for Ripplepaw
Oct 24 2009, 9:45 PM EDT | Post edited: Oct 24 2009, 9:45 PM EDT
Scartail pummeled the black cat's belly again this time when he screamed he didn't stop. Do you find this valuable?    
alyamh
alyamh
65. RE: Mentoring for Ripplepaw
Oct 24 2009, 9:47 PM EDT | Post edited: Oct 24 2009, 9:47 PM EDT
Ripplepaw pulled the black tom away from Scartail, "this is your time to run," she hissed at him, "I suggust you do." Do you find this valuable?    
sherryanime3
sherryanime3
66. RE: Mentoring for Ripplepaw
Oct 24 2009, 9:48 PM EDT | Post edited: Oct 24 2009, 9:48 PM EDT
Dirtheart bit the neck of the black cat,who bit Dirtheart on his paw and blood started seeping out. Do you find this valuable?    
alyamh
alyamh
67. RE: Mentoring for Ripplepaw
Oct 24 2009, 9:51 PM EDT | Post edited: Oct 24 2009, 9:51 PM EDT
Ripplepaw growled and batted the brown tom with her hind paws, carefull not to do too much damage. She knew it was her duty to protect her clan but killing didn't sound too good to Ripplepaw. It made her stomach lurch. Do you find this valuable?    
sherryanime3
sherryanime3
68. RE: Mentoring for Ripplepaw
Oct 24 2009, 9:54 PM EDT | Post edited: Oct 24 2009, 9:54 PM EDT
Dirtheart kept fighting,even though he was bleeding on his other paw.He bit the black tom in the shoulder and knocked him down. Do you find this valuable?    
alyamh
alyamh
69. RE: Mentoring for Ripplepaw
Oct 24 2009, 9:57 PM EDT | Post edited: Oct 24 2009, 9:57 PM EDT
(are they even fighting back?)
Suddenly, the brown tom bit into Ripplepaws throat, his fangs deep in blood as she fell to the ground trembling. Do you find this valuable?    
sherryanime3
sherryanime3
70. RE: Mentoring for Ripplepaw
Oct 24 2009, 10:02 PM EDT | Post edited: Oct 24 2009, 10:02 PM EDT
(yes)
''Ripplepaw!"Dirtheart ran over and snarled at the brown cat.''Go...''He shed his claws in the brown cat`s fur.''AWAY!!!!"He bit as low as he could in the brown tom`s neck so when he lifted up his muzzle blood was dripping everywhere. Do you find this valuable?    
alyamh
alyamh
71. RE: Mentoring for Ripplepaw
Oct 24 2009, 10:03 PM EDT | Post edited: Oct 24 2009, 10:03 PM EDT
Ripplepaw convulsed, her paws flailing, "Dirt-" she coughed up a mouthfull of blood. Do you find this valuable?    
sherryanime3
sherryanime3
72. RE: Mentoring for Ripplepaw
Oct 24 2009, 10:07 PM EDT | Post edited: Oct 24 2009, 10:07 PM EDT
"RIPPLEPAW!!!!!!"Dirtheart ran over to Ripplepaw,his eyes flashing.''Are you all right?''he said with tears seaping from his eyes. Do you find this valuable?    
alyamh
alyamh
73. RE: Mentoring for Ripplepaw
Oct 24 2009, 10:09 PM EDT | Post edited: Oct 24 2009, 10:09 PM EDT
The wound was deep, but the foolish brown tom had not punctured the vital tendon. Ripplepaw closed her eyes slowly. blood seeped onto the ground. Do you find this valuable?    
sherryanime3
sherryanime3
74. RE: Mentoring for Ripplepaw
Oct 24 2009, 10:14 PM EDT | Post edited: Oct 24 2009, 10:14 PM EDT
"NOOOOO!!!!"Dirtheart stuffed his muzzle in Ripplepaw`s fur.

(is she dying?) Do you find this valuable?    
alyamh
alyamh
75. RE: Mentoring for Ripplepaw
Oct 24 2009, 10:17 PM EDT | Post edited: Oct 24 2009, 10:17 PM EDT
(no but she's in shock)
Ripplepaw tried to tell him she was all right, "Dirt.... Dirtheart..." Do you find this valuable?    
sherryanime3
sherryanime3
76. RE: Mentoring for Ripplepaw
Oct 24 2009, 10:19 PM EDT | Post edited: Oct 24 2009, 10:19 PM EDT
Dirtheart closed his eyes,he pulled Ripplepaw softly by the neck into camp. Do you find this valuable?    
alyamh
alyamh
77. RE: Mentoring for Ripplepaw
Oct 24 2009, 10:23 PM EDT | Post edited: Oct 24 2009, 10:23 PM EDT
Ripplepaw squeaked at every tiny bump in the trail. She could barely keep consious while she felt Dirtheart drag her bloody body back to camp. This was her first mager wound and probebly her first scar. Do you find this valuable?    
sherryanime3
sherryanime3
78. RE: Mentoring for Ripplepaw
Oct 24 2009, 10:28 PM EDT | Post edited: Oct 24 2009, 10:28 PM EDT
Dirtheart dragged her to Scartail.''The rouges got her.''he said. Do you find this valuable?    
alyamh
alyamh
79. RE: Mentoring for Ripplepaw
Oct 24 2009, 10:31 PM EDT | Post edited: Oct 24 2009, 10:31 PM EDT
Ripplepaw look up at her mentor, sh tried to get up. The gray she-cat felt ashamed to be taken down with a bite to her throat. Her legs felt shaky, "Scartail I'm-" she flopped down. Do you find this valuable?    
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