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alyamh
alyamh
20. RE: Mentoring for Ripplepaw
Oct 22 2009, 11:49 PM EDT | Post edited: Oct 22 2009, 11:49 PM EDT
She purred and dropped the mouse, "really?" she puffed out her chest. She felt like a warrior all ready! Do you find this valuable?    
sherryanime3
sherryanime3
21. RE: Mentoring for Ripplepaw
Oct 23 2009, 5:15 PM EDT | Post edited: Oct 23 2009, 5:15 PM EDT
''GOOD!''Dirtheart cried a little to loudly.He shook is head.''I wish you wre MY apprentice,''Dirtheart frowned.''But I don`t have any.'' Do you find this valuable?    
alyamh
alyamh
22. RE: Mentoring for Ripplepaw
Oct 23 2009, 7:42 PM EDT | Post edited: Oct 23 2009, 7:42 PM EDT
Ripplekit licked his shoulder, "it's okay," she meowed, "you'll get an apprentice one day." Do you find this valuable?    
Scarpelt95
Scarpelt95
23. RE: Mentoring for Ripplepaw
Oct 23 2009, 7:59 PM EDT | Post edited: Oct 23 2009, 7:59 PM EDT
"''GOOD!''Dirtheart cried a little to loudly.He shook is head.''I wish you wre MY apprentice,''Dirtheart frowned.''But I don`t have any.''"
Scartail looked at Dirtheart, "I will talk to Mangostar, as deputy, maybe I will be able to talk her into getting an apprentice for you." Do you find this valuable?    
sherryanime3
sherryanime3
24. RE: Mentoring for Ripplepaw
Oct 23 2009, 9:41 PM EDT | Post edited: Oct 23 2009, 9:41 PM EDT
Dirtheart sighed happily.''Thanks,Scartail.'' Do you find this valuable?    
Scarpelt95
Scarpelt95
25. RE: Mentoring for Ripplepaw
Oct 23 2009, 10:49 PM EDT | Post edited: Oct 23 2009, 10:49 PM EDT
"Your welcome," he nodded. Then turning back to Ripplepaw he said, "since you are so good with the hunters crouch, if we see any prey, I will give you a chance to hunt." Do you find this valuable?    
alyamh
alyamh
26. RE: Mentoring for Ripplepaw
Oct 23 2009, 10:58 PM EDT | Post edited: Oct 23 2009, 10:58 PM EDT
"Thank you Scartail," Ripplepaw scented the air to see if their was any prey nearby. Do you find this valuable?    
sherryanime3
sherryanime3
27. RE: Mentoring for Ripplepaw
Oct 23 2009, 11:01 PM EDT | Post edited: Oct 24 2009, 9:57 PM EDT
Dirtheart smiled the rest of that day,sighing happily watching Ripplepaw do her training. Do you find this valuable?    
alyamh
alyamh
28. RE: Mentoring for Ripplepaw
Oct 23 2009, 11:05 PM EDT | Post edited: Oct 23 2009, 11:05 PM EDT
(Ripplepaw's a girl)
Sh stalked a thrush, her paw moving swiftly and silently she gave a leap just as it was about to take off and bit down on its neck. She carried it back to them proudly. Do you find this valuable?    
sherryanime3
sherryanime3
29. RE: Mentoring for Ripplepaw
Oct 23 2009, 11:12 PM EDT | Post edited: Oct 23 2009, 11:12 PM EDT
(oops sorry)
Dirtheart smiled mostly when he saw Ripplepaw getting better and better.Everytime she did somthing right,Dirtheart would say ''Good!Your getting it little fuzzy one!''and when she did somthing wrong,Dirtheart would say ''Keep goin`!You`ll get it!'' Do you find this valuable?    
alyamh
alyamh
30. RE: Mentoring for Ripplepaw
Oct 23 2009, 11:21 PM EDT | Post edited: Oct 23 2009, 11:21 PM EDT
Ripplepaw purred at his approval, she would flatten her ears to her head when she did something bad. She missed a rabbit when she stepped on a twig but made up for it when she caught a blackbird just landing. Her skills were sharpening quickly. Do you find this valuable?    
sherryanime3
sherryanime3
31. RE: Mentoring for Ripplepaw
Oct 23 2009, 11:27 PM EDT | Post edited: Oct 23 2009, 11:27 PM EDT
Dirtheart smiled for along time,untill he heard a growl.''Hear that?''he whispered? Do you find this valuable?    
alyamh
alyamh
32. RE: Mentoring for Ripplepaw
Oct 23 2009, 11:41 PM EDT | Post edited: Oct 23 2009, 11:41 PM EDT
"What is it?" she took a small step toward him, her fur bristled with curiousity and fear. Do you find this valuable?    
sherryanime3
sherryanime3
33. RE: Mentoring for Ripplepaw
Oct 23 2009, 11:47 PM EDT | Post edited: Oct 23 2009, 11:47 PM EDT
Dirtheart chrouched.''I don`t know.''Dirtheart looked at Ripplepaw.''Go get Scartail.Me,you,and him can fight it.'' Do you find this valuable?    
alyamh
alyamh
34. RE: Mentoring for Ripplepaw
Oct 23 2009, 11:55 PM EDT | Post edited: Oct 23 2009, 11:55 PM EDT
"Mabey we don't need to fight it," she scampered towards the noise, "it could be friendly." Do you find this valuable?    
sherryanime3
sherryanime3
35. RE: Mentoring for Ripplepaw
Oct 24 2009, 8:32 AM EDT | Post edited: Oct 24 2009, 8:32 AM EDT
Dirtheart gripped his teeth softly on Ripplepaw`s shoulder and pulled her back.''Well,still,you need to ask Scartail for your permission to see what it is.He`s your mentor.He is one of the cats who has to protect you now.'' Do you find this valuable?    
alyamh
alyamh
36. RE: Mentoring for Ripplepaw
Oct 24 2009, 2:09 PM EDT | Post edited: Oct 24 2009, 2:09 PM EDT
"I don't..." Ripplepaw sniffed, "fine. I'll go find him. Scartail!" she bagan to look for her mentor, "Scartail where are you!" Do you find this valuable?    
sherryanime3
sherryanime3
37. RE: Mentoring for Ripplepaw
Oct 24 2009, 2:16 PM EDT | Post edited: Oct 24 2009, 2:16 PM EDT
Dirtheart went the other way.''Scartail!Buddeh!Where are you Scartail buddy?" Do you find this valuable?    
alyamh
alyamh
38. RE: Mentoring for Ripplepaw
Oct 24 2009, 2:22 PM EDT | Post edited: Oct 24 2009, 2:22 PM EDT
Ripplekit began to sniif around for her mentor. Do you find this valuable?    
sherryanime3
sherryanime3
39. RE: Mentoring for Ripplepaw
Oct 24 2009, 2:26 PM EDT | Post edited: Oct 24 2009, 2:26 PM EDT
As Dirtheart walked,he heard the growl.It became louder and louder.Then,Dirtheart heard a crack.Dirtheart looked beneath his paws,and kept on walking.Every time he said 'Scartail'a crack would appear.Soon,Dirtheart relized he was close to quicksand.Dirtheart ran back,but shadows of cats carried him away."HELP!"he screamed as loud as he could. Do you find this valuable?    
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