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Scarpelt95
Scarpelt95
Mentoring for Ripplepaw
Oct 19 2009, 8:17 PM EDT | Post edited: Oct 20 2009, 6:14 PM EDT
"Ripplekit," Scartail called, "it's time for your training." Do you find this valuable?    
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alyamh
alyamh
1. RE: Mentoring for Ripplekit
Oct 19 2009, 8:48 PM EDT | Post edited: Oct 19 2009, 8:48 PM EDT
Ripplepaw scampered up to him, "yeah Scartail," she meowed, "what are we doing?" Do you find this valuable?    
Scarpelt95
Scarpelt95
2. RE: Mentoring for Ripplepaw
Oct 19 2009, 9:10 PM EDT | Post edited: Oct 20 2009, 6:14 PM EDT
"I am going to show you around the BrookClan borders today," he meowed.
(Sorry I meant Ripplepaw.)
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alyamh
alyamh
3. RE: Mentoring for Ripplekit
Oct 19 2009, 9:16 PM EDT | Post edited: Oct 19 2009, 9:16 PM EDT
Its okay)
"Neat!" she purred, her paws itched to be out in the territory, she had all ready seen one of the borders when she went with Darkwhisker.
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Scarpelt95
Scarpelt95
4. RE: Mentoring for Ripplepaw
Oct 20 2009, 6:12 PM EDT | Post edited: Oct 20 2009, 6:12 PM EDT
Scartail looked at Ripplepaw, she reminded him so much of himself when he was a apprentice, he purred. Do you find this valuable?    
alyamh
alyamh
5. RE: Mentoring for Ripplepaw
Oct 20 2009, 11:05 PM EDT | Post edited: Oct 20 2009, 11:05 PM EDT
"Let's go," she tugged his tail playfully, her eyes shined with excitement. Do you find this valuable?    
Scarpelt95
Scarpelt95
6. RE: Mentoring for Ripplepaw
Oct 21 2009, 7:40 PM EDT | Post edited: Oct 21 2009, 7:40 PM EDT
"I don't know about you but I eat in the morning," he said jokingly. Do you find this valuable?    
alyamh
alyamh
7. RE: Mentoring for Ripplepaw
Oct 21 2009, 8:39 PM EDT | Post edited: Oct 21 2009, 8:39 PM EDT
"I've all ready eaten," Ripplepaw purred, "an apprentice needs to get up early to train so I got up earlier to warm up! I'm ready for anything but I'll wait for you." Do you find this valuable?    
Scarpelt95
Scarpelt95
8. RE: Mentoring for Ripplepaw
Oct 21 2009, 9:51 PM EDT | Post edited: Oct 21 2009, 9:51 PM EDT
"I will skip for now to reward you, the last apprentice I had didn't always want to get up," he purred, "and I might be able to teach you the basics of hunting today," he said. Do you find this valuable?    
alyamh
alyamh
9. RE: Mentoring for Ripplepaw
Oct 21 2009, 11:25 PM EDT | Post edited: Oct 21 2009, 11:25 PM EDT
"Oh hunting," she meowed, "I've tried hunting before but I don't think it's possible to learn the hunters crough on your own. I was told their are different ways to stalk different prey, is that true?" Do you find this valuable?    
Scarpelt95
Scarpelt95
10. RE: Mentoring for Ripplepaw
Oct 22 2009, 9:09 AM EDT | Post edited: Oct 22 2009, 9:09 AM EDT
"Yes, a mouse will feel you before it sees you and a rabbit will smell you before it sees you." Do you find this valuable?    
sherryanime3
sherryanime3
11. RE: Mentoring for Ripplepaw
Oct 22 2009, 7:11 PM EDT | Post edited: Oct 22 2009, 7:11 PM EDT
Dirtheart was hunting alone,since he had no apprentice.He saw Scartail and Ripplepaw coming toward him.He dropped the mouse that was in his mouth and ran over to Scartail.''Whats up?''he asked. Do you find this valuable?    
alyamh
alyamh
12. RE: Mentoring for Ripplepaw
Oct 22 2009, 7:12 PM EDT | Post edited: Oct 22 2009, 7:12 PM EDT
"Scartail is teaching me how to do the hunters crouch!" Ripplepaw meowed. Do you find this valuable?    
sherryanime3
sherryanime3
13. RE: Mentoring for Ripplepaw
Oct 22 2009, 7:23 PM EDT | Post edited: Oct 22 2009, 7:23 PM EDT
Dirtheart looked down.''Cool!''he said.''I remember the time when I just learned that kind of stuff...'' Do you find this valuable?    
alyamh
alyamh
14. RE: Mentoring for Ripplepaw
Oct 22 2009, 7:31 PM EDT | Post edited: Oct 22 2009, 7:31 PM EDT
Ripplepaw tried to stalk Dirthearts tail, she hobbled along in her paws, she could keep low to the ground but her stalking was way off. "Oh I'll never get it right!" she flopped down on her hindquarters. Do you find this valuable?    
sherryanime3
sherryanime3
15. RE: Mentoring for Ripplepaw
Oct 22 2009, 7:34 PM EDT | Post edited: Oct 22 2009, 7:34 PM EDT
Dirtheart looked down and laughed.''Don`t worry,''he said smiling.''Practice makes perfect.''He scoot his mouse in front of Ripplepaw. Do you find this valuable?    
Scarpelt95
Scarpelt95
16. RE: Mentoring for Ripplepaw
Oct 22 2009, 7:35 PM EDT | Post edited: Oct 22 2009, 7:35 PM EDT
"Sure you will, you know how to keep low to the ground but you need to put more weight on your hindquarters." Do you find this valuable?    
sherryanime3
sherryanime3
17. RE: Mentoring for Ripplepaw
Oct 22 2009, 7:41 PM EDT | Post edited: Oct 22 2009, 7:41 PM EDT
Dirtheart shook his head,ageeing to what Scartail had just said. Do you find this valuable?    
alyamh
alyamh
18. RE: Mentoring for Ripplepaw
Oct 22 2009, 8:15 PM EDT | Post edited: Oct 22 2009, 8:15 PM EDT
"Okay Scartail," she tried again. This time she put most of her weight on her hind paws and less on her forepaws. She took a few pawsteps forward and pounced on the dead mouse Dirtheart caught. Her claws sheathed, she scooped it up and caught it in her mouth. Her eyes shined bright. Do you find this valuable?    
Scarpelt95
Scarpelt95
19. RE: Mentoring for Ripplepaw
Oct 22 2009, 8:21 PM EDT | Post edited: Oct 22 2009, 8:21 PM EDT
Scartail's eyes gleamed, "that was amazing, you got it perfectly!" Do you find this valuable?    
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